http://punch-kicker15.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] punch-kicker15.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragonyphoenix 2015-01-06 04:50 am (UTC)

This was delightful! I'm so impressed you managed to work so many scenes in and keep the rhymes and the word count as well. Great job.
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