Oh no, don't feed bad. I don't feed badly about my story. I do think it could be improved and not just in the spot you mentioned. But that's part and parcel of coming up with it week by week. For example, I think we should have been seeing Spike as a reminder of what's going on with him, but he's trapped in a cage. It's sort of boring unless someone comes to taunt him or he works on a way to get out.

I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. I'm all in all very pleased with this chapter.