http://red-satin-doll.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] red-satin-doll.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] dragonyphoenix 2015-12-23 06:02 am (UTC)

I've just jumped in at the end here so I've missed a lot (also I have read only one book in the potter verse so I'm pretty clueless about that fandom) but this is funny and charming! The voices (Anya, Giles, Cordy) are all spot-on all the way.

And the graphics look great if I do say so myself; it was a brilliant idea to incorporate them into the story!

I noticed some typos in the story but I don't know how fussed you are about them? the date you added the graphics is given as "23 Jan 15" when you mean December.

and I know I got you killed in another dimension but in this one I haven't hurt you at all so you do have to like me more, right?

*GIGGLESNORT* This line sold me on the story.

I'm afraid she's going to team up with those wizards against him.

That actually sounds like a completely plausible fear.

That girl needs to get back to having a sex life of her own so she can stop criticizing mine. Damn, I can't believe I wrote that. How do I erase on this infernal machine?

AHAHAHAHAHA.....

What I did to Buffy and Willow? But they loved the gowns.</i Keep telling yourself that sweetie. Will there be further chapters or is this the end?

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