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dragonyphoenix) wrote2010-04-26 06:57 pm
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My friends and I write haiki... for National Poetry Month
I was going through some poetry I'd saved off and ran across these. I wrote this winter before last:
icicle
giving itself away
drip by drip
and got this response from my Aunt Kate:
icicle
making more of itself
with each flake of snow
and this from Kat, note how biting cold has two meanings. Nice job!
popsicle
freezing itself solid
biting cold
icicle
giving itself away
drip by drip
and got this response from my Aunt Kate:
icicle
making more of itself
with each flake of snow
and this from Kat, note how biting cold has two meanings. Nice job!
popsicle
freezing itself solid
biting cold