dragonyphoenix: Francine from Strangers in Paradise (Francine)
dragonyphoenix ([personal profile] dragonyphoenix) wrote2010-04-26 06:57 pm
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My friends and I write haiki... for National Poetry Month

I was going through some poetry I'd saved off and ran across these. I wrote this winter before last:

icicle
giving itself away
drip by drip

and got this response from my Aunt Kate:

icicle
making more of itself
with each flake of snow

and this from Kat, note how biting cold has two meanings. Nice job!

popsicle
freezing itself solid
biting cold