Fic: The First of Her White Dresses

[dragonyphoenix]

Title: The First of Her White Dresses
Fandom: BtVS
Characters: Spike/Dru
Rating: G
Concrit: Please, in comments
Disclaimer: They aren't mine, not yet, but they will be... once I've taken over the world! Bwah-ha-ha
Note: Written for a prompt at Open on Sunday: white - but not posted there because it's more than a hundred words.
Word Count: 231

 

He waited just outside the door, chain-smoking cigarettes in the dark, the night she came home in the first of the white dresses. The speech he'd been reviewing – where have you been, you shouldn't run off without me – fell to the ground with his cigarette. “What the bloody hell is this then? White? Lace? The innocent look doesn't suit, Dru.”

Her hand trembled and he wrapped his dark coat around her. “Sorry, pet. I was worried is all. I didn't know where you'd gotten to.” He held her until the tremblings stopped and tried to pretend he hadn't felt them.

“It's not innocence,” she told him. “White is temporary: as quick as a lightning flash, or like the moon in the sky, waxing and then waning away, or even like the sun's feeble light overwhelmed by the dark that stretches out forever.”

He hugged her more tightly to him. “You're not temporary, love. You're eternal, you are.”

She patted at his cheek. “Not me, silly. It speaks in symbols. I had to show it that I am vast and dark and unstoppable, and that it is nothing more than a mere flash of light.”

“I'm afraid I don't understand, love.”

Her hand stared trembling again. “The disease,” she said. “I had to show it that I'm stronger, or it'd never leave me alive.”

Comments

[dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com]

Thanks! Dru can be frustratingly difficult to write.

[lynnenne]

Lovely.

[dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com]

Thank you. *grin*

[canadian-kazz.livejournal.com]

Very lovely. I liked Spike's bit at the beginning, planning a rant and forgetting it all. Well done.

I feel like this could be one part in a bigger, longer fic, but it also stands well on its own as a character piece.

[dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com]

Oh good, I'm glad you liked the part about the dropped rant. I wasn't sure how well that worked.

Excellent icon, BTW. That's such a funny scene!

[rebcake.livejournal.com]

This is a great explanation for why Dru goes from white, nightgowny frocks to brilliant gothic red/black once she's feeling better. Everything means something to Dru.

[dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com]

Yep, there has to be a reason. Glad you found this one plausible!