dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Francine angel)
dragonyphoenix ([personal profile] dragonyphoenix) wrote2012-12-09 01:25 pm
Entry tags:

Fic: Dust Drifting Like Snowflakes in the Snowy Wastes

Title: Dust Drifting Like Snowflakes in the Snowy Wastes
Fandom: BtVS
Summary: Spike fell into despair after Xander died.
Rating: PG
Concrit: Please, in comments
Disclaimer: They aren't mine, not yet, but they will be... once I've taken over the world! Bwah-ha-ha

Note: Written for a prompt at Open on Sunday: fall
Word Count: 100


The blizzard had buried him. Digging out of the snow had been too much like digging out of the earth. Thinking about graves, both old and new, he continued north, driving himself until his legs wouldn't hold him up any longer.


Where he'd fallen... Spike had thought it would be as desolate as his heart, but it wasn't. It was beautiful. Staring up at the stars, surrounded by drifting snow, he could wait, peaceful and serene, until he'd faded to nothingness and found Xander again. The dust would look just like snowflakes, if there were anyone there to see them.

[identity profile] chaoskir.livejournal.com 2012-12-09 06:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Short and intense!

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2012-12-10 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Excellent. That's exactly what I was going for. Thanks!

[identity profile] sparrow2000.livejournal.com 2012-12-09 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Really nicely one, especially that last line.

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2012-12-10 03:12 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks. I also like the last line.

[identity profile] jerzeyanjel.livejournal.com 2012-12-09 11:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Awe poor Spike. My secret kink is Spander. This was heartbreakingly beautiful!

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2012-12-10 03:13 pm (UTC)(link)
heartbreakingly beautiful... Aww, thank you. That's an awesome thing to say.

And Spander is my totally out in the open kink. ;-)

[identity profile] baudown.livejournal.com 2012-12-10 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
Really lovely.

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2012-12-10 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you.

[identity profile] span-tastic.livejournal.com 2013-01-04 04:22 pm (UTC)(link)
*sniff*
Sad but beautiful

[identity profile] dragonyphoenix.livejournal.com 2013-01-04 05:52 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you. ;-)