Poem: What the Oracle Didn't Tell You

[dragonyphoenix]

It's been a while since I've written haiku but I remember that it's supposed to have an image or two and that it's supposed to be ambiguous so the reader can put his/her own interpretation onto it.

"What the Oracle Didn't Tell You"

The fruit
that is never plucked
rots on the vine.

Comments

[velvetwhip.livejournal.com]

Nice haiku.


Gabrielle

[comlodge.livejournal.com]

Oh yes. In three lines you've said what the longer poem said but didn't say. Lovely. :D