dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (frida and god)
2014-06-17 03:54 pm
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100 ways

I found a fun writing exercise: rewrite the sentence one-hundred different ways. At least it's fun so far but I'm nowhere near completing it. Maybe by the time I'm up around one-hundred I'll be really frustrated and annoyed. I used the first sentence of the story I'm writing for Summer of Giles. It took me about twenty minutes to generate these twelve sentences. (The first is the original version of the sentence from the story.)

After another hour I'm up to twenty-six sentences. It's definitely getting harder.

Faith took one look at the overly stuffed red velvet chairs and decided to stand. )
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2012-08-29 01:45 pm
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Writing Exercise: psychic distance

So I was playing with Gardner’s psychic distance example, turning it into a writing exercise. I took a scene and tried writing it at each of his psychic distance levels, planning to compare each new scene. It didn’t work out the way I’d expected. Instead of ending up with four (I left one level out) comparably written scenes, they kept getting better. I’m not sure if that’s because the final levels are easier or if I was editing as I rewrote. Anyway, here’s how it came out.


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dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Captain Jack)
2012-07-17 11:57 am
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(no subject)

This is a writing exercise I tried the other day. Forgive the cludgy text I wrote; they are early drafts.

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