dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (blackadder)
2019-10-13 10:17 pm
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2 haiku on autumn

One red-gold leaf
Skating on a sudden squall
Falls

The grey squirrel
Rakes leaves over its hoard of acorns.
Buried treasure.

dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Francine angel)
2014-01-26 05:35 pm
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Poem: What the Oracle Didn't Tell You

It's been a while since I've written haiku but I remember that it's supposed to have an image or two and that it's supposed to be ambiguous so the reader can put his/her own interpretation onto it.

"What the Oracle Didn't Tell You"

The fruit
that is never plucked
rots on the vine.
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2010-12-21 08:46 pm
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haiku: eclipse

where has your light
gone,
solstice moon?
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2010-08-03 07:55 pm
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bzzzz

Fat bees laze
from flower to flower...
Sunday afternoon


dragonyphoenix: Francine from Strangers in Paradise (Francine)
2010-04-26 06:57 pm
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My friends and I write haiki... for National Poetry Month

I was going through some poetry I'd saved off and ran across these. I wrote this winter before last:

icicle
giving itself away
drip by drip

and got this response from my Aunt Kate:

icicle
making more of itself
with each flake of snow

and this from Kat, note how biting cold has two meanings. Nice job!

popsicle
freezing itself solid
biting cold
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2010-04-07 07:54 am
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Haiku by Carol Montgomery for National Poetry Month

Haiku by Carol Montgomery

old woman, wrapping
her cat’s gifts
—centering the bows


And mandielion has compiled some wonderful baseball haiku
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (SpikeFred)
2009-07-18 11:40 am
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cocoon haiku

spreading across
the open cocoon...
a butterfly's wings



spreading across
the empty cocoon...
lunar wings
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-04-08 12:46 pm
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haiku

even sunflowers
vanish into mist...
CAW

sunflowers and
the sound of a solitary gong
vanish into mist

Tigger
bounces ahead and vanishes...
morning mist

new pond...
algae-covered lily stems
tadpole's feast
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-04-07 06:26 pm
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morning birdsong

morning birdsong
lightens my way
to work
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-03-31 05:08 pm
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old roses

spring breezes
carry your scent...
old roses
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Captain Jack)
2009-03-24 06:57 pm
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spring snow

reaching down
towards the waterbound moon...
spring snow

dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-02-22 07:09 pm
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dancing water

Variations from musing on the theme of "dancing water".

breathless...
dancing water sparkles with
the light

wind tossed waves...
in the placid depths a fish approaches
the hook

dancing water...
the light mirrored on
green leaves

wet shoes
jumping into the puddle
splash!

slow dancing
swaying in time to
unheard music
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-02-10 08:23 pm
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tears drip down like rain

tears drip down like rain
and freeze against your icy expanse
winter's chill
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Still Life Reviving)
2009-01-14 11:34 pm
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icicle

icicle
giving itself away
drip by drip

And some responses when I shared this haiku with friends:

icicle
making more of itself
with each flake of snow

popsicle
freezing itself solid
biting cold
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2008-08-12 08:58 pm
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solitary crane

morning mist
a solitary crane
settling on a rock
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2008-08-09 04:43 pm
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solitary crane

cascading thunderdown
a solitary crane
settles on a rock
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2008-07-13 12:10 pm
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Haiku: cut roses

Cut roses
in a crystal vase.
A dark house.
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2008-04-25 08:13 pm
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Haiku: Petals drifting

Petals drifing,
carried gently by the wind.
How beautiful.
dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (Default)
2008-03-26 11:42 pm
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Haiku: Goose with broken wing

Goose with broken wing
Denied freedom of the sky
Flies through the water.


Goose with broken wing
Struggles against the current
Dreams of sky freedom.