OK. I've updated the final insult. This is what I love about concrit. I get to make the story better. Didn't just change that one line but gave it a better ending as well. I'm loving how Xander got Spike's cultural reference when Spike didn't get his.
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Date: 2009-03-20 02:20 am (UTC)