Thanks. I was rather going for two moods: all comic booky action sequence during the dream and then slowly shifting to more intimate after he wakes up. Don't think I got the intimate as well as I'd like but, in this story, they aren't intimate... yet.
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Date: 2010-01-22 10:33 pm (UTC)