Thank you. I was planning a Jonathan is strong because giving up the gun is harder than using it theme but it shifted to this on the second draft.
I did, however, plan to put dialogue into this one. My drabbles seem to have become dialogue-light and I wanted a more grounded story this time. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;-)
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Date: 2013-10-01 02:41 pm (UTC)I did, however, plan to put dialogue into this one. My drabbles seem to have become dialogue-light and I wanted a more grounded story this time. I'm glad you enjoyed it. ;-)