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It's been a while since I've written haiku but I remember that it's supposed to have an image or two and that it's supposed to be ambiguous so the reader can put his/her own interpretation onto it.

"What the Oracle Didn't Tell You"

The fruit
that is never plucked
rots on the vine.

Date: 2014-01-26 10:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetwhip.livejournal.com
Nice haiku.


Gabrielle
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Date: 2014-01-27 07:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] comlodge.livejournal.com
Oh yes. In three lines you've said what the longer poem said but didn't say. Lovely. :D

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