Oh, this is fantastic. I love the addition of Cordelia to it all; it achieved a nice balance. I love your Anya voice; she has a simplistic way of writing that sounds much like Anya did on the show; stripped down to the bare essentials and meanings of a word, but is definitely not child-like.
I liked your Snape and how he came through, even once he was no longer writing. Having Hallie deliver messages the few times was a really nice touch; once to have him not like it, the second time to demonstrate how important getting it to him as quickly as possible was.
I do love the fact that Snape completely understands loving someone but not being sure if you can trust them. If anyone can understand that kind of paranoia, it would be him (and Moody).
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Date: 2015-12-06 05:03 am (UTC)I liked your Snape and how he came through, even once he was no longer writing. Having Hallie deliver messages the few times was a really nice touch; once to have him not like it, the second time to demonstrate how important getting it to him as quickly as possible was.
I do love the fact that Snape completely understands loving someone but not being sure if you can trust them. If anyone can understand that kind of paranoia, it would be him (and Moody).
I honestly really like this.