dragonyphoenix: Blackadder looking at scraps of paper, saying "It could use a beta" (vampkiss)
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New to Bite Sized Bits of Fic and thought "dreams" was the prompt.  Wrote this.

Pairing: Spike/Xander
Rating: Teen

During the day it's "Fangless" and "Blood Breath" but, at night, he's there, just out of reach.  In the arch of his pelvis, the tilt of his torso, the look in his eyes, there's... something.  Something unlooked for.  Unwanted, but not really.

Feet, steady and sure, take him where he doesn't want to go.  Where he does want...  Reaching out, he vanishes into mist and shadows, blue eyes fading out last and then, he's gone.

Date: 2009-04-24 12:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] bmblbee.livejournal.com
Lovely and very well done!

Date: 2009-04-24 09:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucy-ash.livejournal.com
Thank you.

Date: 2009-04-24 04:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] brunettepet.livejournal.com
I like the dreamy feeling of Spike hovering just out of reach in this. Nice job.

Date: 2009-04-24 09:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucy-ash.livejournal.com
Thanks. Did come out nice and dreamy, didn't it?

I love it when a story does what I want it to. Much more well behaved than the "oh no you don't, miss thang" stories.

Date: 2009-04-24 05:29 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] hello-spikey.livejournal.com
aw, haunting.

Great little visual details.

Date: 2009-04-24 09:55 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lucy-ash.livejournal.com
Excellent. Thank you so much for saying so. I've been working on, I'm not sure how to say it. Bettering my details? Nice to hear that it's working.

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